Wednesday, May 19, 2010

The quest for the fish*Part 2*

Back from where we started Captain Newport he had been swift sailing off. Waiting for a fish or two to bite off Cackle wind creek. Now several hours had past the maids had started cooking
As soon as the wind arrived only 1 person had been tossed over board from the larger gusts. Rain was heard as everybody got pulled over board. "Papa! Several hours have passed we crash landed in Hawaii!"Connor exclaimed. Captain Newport laughed and took the seven hooks. As the gobbling of raw cold meat wafted over(Soon his adventure is famous and they invented the hook grabber would be Edison with his light). As soon as they sailed larger then life to a new world the wind stopped. Volcano ash fulled the air, wind was hard to breathe through, there was plenty of exotic fish and he would invent the fore broth thrower(Now the punting pull thrower). Over all the sounds you could hear pirates who had slaved some of the humans that lived in this world. Taking a fish a Octor the biggest thing had grabbed the sailing hook and pulled it apart. This is just one of their dangers there are much more to face. They knew nothing of the fish they saw here so the just picked a trout. This was no ordering for a smaller fish. These fish grew to a terrible jaws and paws size. Staying careful Newport had to stay in the upper decks to examine some terrible sized fish. "Aye, I say this is a fish 100 times the size of cold whisper and Decker washers,"Captain Newport(Not thinking of his heroic ways)groaned. "We may be getting more for th'se fish. Hail our supper for tonight! Oh Lord God thank you for our supper of fish. This will be enough for Christmas." Emily picked up the fish. She licked a tooth it was so soft and nice she cuddled it(not like shark teeth).
End of part 2

2 comments:

  1. Wow Ella, I have just been reading your fabulous stories. You have such a talent for writing. I am delighted to see that you still love writing and your stories are getting more and more interesting. I bet your Mum and Dad are proud of you too.
    From Mrs McKerracher.

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  2. Ella, what exciting language you have used in your stories. I can't wait for more.

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