Chapter 1
The captain was pulling the walking stick from his pocket like so and tied it to Connors bed. He hugged his daughter and ate the fish. Next he wrote his letter to the president, went off to the suggested part of the world maps,Lastly he stroke the puppy from the next blocks and moved away. The president had wanted several crews to fish from Centre hole and bring back at least 45 fish other then the 20 fish one crew catches a year. Captain Newport accepted and chose the Manny Shags. He was wondering as his pioneer wife, boy named Connor and girl named Elizabeth came in that they would live and not die ever. If he had been unhappy he wouldn't accept the quest. Many ships like the great whale, pretty dolphins, Rainbow rain and pioneer acorns. The night was nearly here he had his supper of tuna and trout that had been lay in the river as decorations. He set sail on the ship and made Elizabeth go to bed. As the ships set sail the boat rocked by the waves and thunder he fell asleep.
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Your opening paragraph is awesome Ella. I can't wait to read more about Captain Newport and his journey on the sea!! And learn more about his family and how they live in 1808! Mumxx
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